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Silent Voices
People Come
People Go
Names Come
Many we do not know
Whispers of being
In an immaterial world
They come in singles
Sometimes in pairs
And in a corner, they stay curled
Members come
They listen in
Listen in silence
Never a word from them
They stay just a while
Smoke on the wind
They stay just a while
Then head out again
What,
Pray then,
Can we learn from them?
That secrets are kept
By these shadowy men?
That we can find
When they come again.
Place them as you will. To ask who they are, I cannot answer for you. I personally see two or three answers to that for
myself. (Names in an IRC chatroom?, Unknown strangers walking into the room where you are chatting with friends?
Government spies? Aliens?) Another person has told me they see the people as elves. What you see depends on you. Like
the idea of leaving open questions. and I write with this in mind to some degree. When I write, I start with an image, a
sound, a mental video, or a raw stream of words. In all but the last case I try to relay what *I* experience without
actually saying it. If you as the reader sees the same image as I originally did, that's great. yet if you see something
else in it, that's wonderful too :)
This one is interesting in that I believe I have largely forgotten the original image from whence it came. Now when I
read through it I see an image that may or may not resemble the original. In any case, I'm going on here about imagery
and if I proceed further here, than I may fast end up drilling into an empty hole.
See what ye see
And be what ye be
For that is as is intended
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