HEY people! How ya'll doin? Sorry I haven't been on here in a while, school's been keepin me pretty buisy. We just got done puttin on a play, DRACULA. Just so you know I wasn't in the play, though I would have liked to be, but I was to afraid to try out. I was working back stage, which was pretty cool, but I think that the play went really well. The first day was a little rusty but the other two days were good. Plus i got extra credit in two clsses and comunity service in one for doin this. Anyhow here's another piece of mine entitled: Promises Made.
Someone made me a promise that they said they'd always keep,
Now ten years later that promise is gone, dropped in the ocean deep.
I remember that promise to this day foreward,
And every time I think about it my eye's they start to leak.
He promised that he'd never go away to a place where I'd never find him,
But just five years ago I saw him taken away, but I fallowed in my car right behind him.
When we reached our destination,
He was put in a room that said critical patient.
I tried to look in but they would'nt let me,
And I was afraid that if he didn't know i was there, then he'd loose his mind and forget me.
Now it's today and he never came back,
But I take him flowers every day, so he'll look down and say I'm sorry, I love you, Love JACK.
So what did ya'll think of that one, If you can guess what it's about then I'll give you a prize! Well not really but anyhow. Oh, and just so that you know this is not based on a true story..... at all. Gotta go to shleepy shleep now so I'll post again A.S.A.P. :) :K
Someone made me a promise that they said they'd always keep,
Now ten years later that promise is gone, dropped in the ocean deep.
I remember that promise to this day foreward,
And every time I think about it my eye's they start to leak.
He promised that he'd never go away to a place where I'd never find him,
But just five years ago I saw him taken away, but I fallowed in my car right behind him.
When we reached our destination,
He was put in a room that said critical patient.
I tried to look in but they would'nt let me,
And I was afraid that if he didn't know i was there, then he'd loose his mind and forget me.
Now it's today and he never came back,
But I take him flowers every day, so he'll look down and say I'm sorry, I love you, Love JACK.
So what did ya'll think of that one, If you can guess what it's about then I'll give you a prize! Well not really but anyhow. Oh, and just so that you know this is not based on a true story..... at all. Gotta go to shleepy shleep now so I'll post again A.S.A.P. :) :K