Guess what my friends? I now have comments! Now ya'll can tel me what you think of my stuff. :) well i gotta make this quick cuz i got a crap load of homework to do, so here's another piece. This one is called: A Pillow.

It's midnight and I'm still wide awake. I can see the moonlight strean through my window. I watch the water slither across the smooth rocks of the stream that lays beside my bedroom window.
"Why can't I sleep?" I think to my self as I listen to th silence of the night. i start to look at the clouds as they shift across the sky, big, fluffy, and as white as snow against the navey blue blankets of heaven. They look so soft, like a freshly fluffed feater pillow. My eyes start to fall and my head starts to droop, and the next thing I know I'm in the most wonderful dream I've ever had.

So there it is and now it is time for me to go. Solong :).

HEY people! How ya'll doin? Sorry I haven't been on here in a while, school's been keepin me pretty buisy. We just got done puttin on a play, DRACULA. Just so you know I wasn't in the play, though I would have liked to be, but I was to afraid to try out. I was working back stage, which was pretty cool, but I think that the play went really well. The first day was a little rusty but the other two days were good. Plus i got extra credit in two clsses and comunity service in one for doin this. Anyhow here's another piece of mine entitled: Promises Made.

Someone made me a promise that they said they'd always keep,
Now ten years later that promise is gone, dropped in the ocean deep.
I remember that promise to this day foreward,
And every time I think about it my eye's they start to leak.
He promised that he'd never go away to a place where I'd never find him,
But just five years ago I saw him taken away, but I fallowed in my car right behind him.
When we reached our destination,
He was put in a room that said critical patient.
I tried to look in but they would'nt let me,
And I was afraid that if he didn't know i was there, then he'd loose his mind and forget me.
Now it's today and he never came back,
But I take him flowers every day, so he'll look down and say I'm sorry, I love you, Love JACK.

So what did ya'll think of that one, If you can guess what it's about then I'll give you a prize! Well not really but anyhow. Oh, and just so that you know this is not based on a true story..... at all. Gotta go to shleepy shleep now so I'll post again A.S.A.P. :) :K